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Amazon Studios Passes On Havana Homicide

Amazon Studios is one of a very few outlets that will accept unsolicited scripts, and I decided to submit a screenplay of the latest Carina Quintana Mystery, Havana Homicide. They have, however,  now “…determined that it does not meet the needs of our Development Slate at this time.”

I can’t say I was surprised. I would have been far more surprised–although, of course, deliriously happy!–if they had accepted it. The odds here are something like a junior high football player making it to the NFL.  And those odds were, it seems, not overcome with a script that includes a very attractive and clever lesbian Latina detective married to another woman, buzzy locales, including Havana and Miami Beach, and a terrific story. In any case, I did at least  get the experience of writing another screenplay. And the experience caused me to embark on yet another; I’m finishing up a screenplay of Dark Fire; Yesterday’s Tears, my sci-fi novel. We’ll see if Amazon’s Development Slate may be more amenable to that genre at this time!

In any case, I have attached a copy of the Havana Homicide screen play to this post. If you enjoyed reading plays in school–or more recently–you might have fun with this. Please enjoy!

 

HAVANA HOMICIDE screenplay

 

 

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DARK FIRE REDUX

Didn’t expect that title, eh?

Well, I just finished writing a screenplay of Havana Homicide for submission to Amazon Studios–no expectations, but hope springs eternal!–and totally enjoyed the (somewhat grueling) experience.  I did a rather good job, according to Laura, who says it’s better than the book.

Anyway, in thinking about what I might do next I decided to try my hand at another screenplay. It’s an interesting change from writing a novel. The form demands you to be way more concise and focused and, of course, also emphasizes dialogue, and I found the experience extremely satisfying. Havana Homicide, much as it’s my fave of the Carina books, is a fairly straightforward story, despite having some interesting twists and turns. So, challenging as it was to write the HH screenplay, I’m going to be a masochist and try my hand at an even more complex story and find out if I can turn that into an equally credible screenplay.

What came to mind pretty quickly was, you guessed it, Dark Fire; Yesterday’s Tears. I’ve been away from it for a while and realized right away that I needed to sit down and read the whole book before even thinking about opening my screenplay software. again.  And what happened next was a very pleasant surprise.  (Recall that DFYT is my only non-Carina novel out there and is based on a sci-fi trope, although it’s basically a love story intended to appeal to non-sci-fi fans, as well as die-hard fans of the genre.)  I sat down, read it in two afternoons AND LOVED IT! It’s a terrific story, told really well.

And that’s what led me to write this post.

If you’re looking around for a book to read I strongly recommend getting your hands on a copy. I  think (and hope) you’ll love it! And remember, DFTY is available in paperback for you e-book-phobes!

Happy spring and summer reading!

D

 

I Had a Dream…

Nothing along the lines of MLK’s, though.  I got the flu last week when we were in Orlando. A couple nights later, back home, sleeping fitfully and totally miserable, I woke at about 3AM with a story going around in my head. It was almost fully developed, but over the next few nearly-as-sleepless nights, I began filling in the details. Yesterday afternoon I finally felt decent enough to sit down and write it out.  Laura thinks it could be an episode of Black Mirror. See what you think.

 

DashCam PlayBack

 by

David M Benson

c 2017 David M. Benson and Bruised Peach Productions

 

Sean Tobin, Sergeant Sean Tobin, was roughly halfway through his usual four to midnight shift and roughly halfway through the section of the city’s northwest quadrant that had become known locally as Restaurant Row, when fifty yards ahead a large man in a boxy suit and gray fedora ran full speed out the front door of Sustainably Yours  and headlong into a baby blue vintage Cadillac. Before the passenger door was fully closed the Caddy peeled away from the curb not far in front of Tobin’s decidedly non-vintage Dodge Charger patrol car and ran the red light at the corner.

A few measured words and number combinations spoken into his headset mic let dispatch know where he was and that Tobin was now in pursuit of the scofflaw, although when asked for the Caddy’s tag number, he answered with the verbal equivalent of a shrug.

“Standby.”

Tobin, squinting to make out the unfamiliar tag, hit his lights and let wail a single blast of siren just as the Caddy driver ignored the next red light, choosing instead a screeching right turn on red, although without the obligatory stop that the law says should precede one. And his quarry was now really booking, at least fifty or so in a thirty zone. But within a few car lengths, and to Tobin’s great surprise, the Caddy slowed, coming to a stop next to the solid row of parked cars that lined the street. Tobin stopped the Charger a half car length back and slightly to the Caddy’s left flank and took a moment to note the two burly men who inhabited its front seat, and to study the tag.

At first he thought it was the antique car variety that the state could be cajoled into issuing for any car more than twenty-five years old, if the owner filled out a form and wrote a small check.

“Damn,” Tobin muttered, before keying his mic, reading out the tag number and adding, as he prepared to step out of his car, that dispatch was unlikely to find a record of it, despite its apparently local provenance.

The reason was simple although Tobin was sure the explanation would be more complex. The tag itself was ancient, an original from the early sixties with Dec and 62 decals stuck to its upper corners. It made sense only in that the Caddy, judging by its low tailfins, also appeared to be a ‘62, and it looked not a day older than its pristine tags, the big car’s pale paint and white vinyl roof looking dealer fresh. The two big men in the front seat had been speaking in quite an animated fashion, with regular pointing in various directions and shoulder shrugs punctuating their conversation. Tobin hesitated and on a hunch asked dispatch if there had been any calls from Sustainably Yours within the past few minutes. When he was told there had not been he stepped out and strode toward the baby blue enigma.

The Caddy promptly peeled away, fishtailing and leaving ten yards of S-shaped rubber on the road and the acrid smell of rubber smoke in the air. Tobin sprinted back to the Charger and as he slammed it into gear and floored the throttle, once again keyed his mic, letting dispatch know that a pursuit had begun and restating a description of the car and its beefy passengers. He also requested assistance. He kept a running monologue as his prey wove its way toward the edge of the city, setting an impressive pace that reminded Tobin why Cadillacs were once called the standard of the world, automotively speaking. Tobin would gain around the turns and the Caddy would make up some ground on the straights, despite the Charger’s hemi V-8. It slowed only once, as it approached the new junior high, which was known as such only to distinguish it from the old one, which dated from the early fifties rather than the former’s mid-eighties pedigree. Help was now close by, he was told, with one of Tobin’s colleagues more or less paralleling their route and another ahead, laying back to see what the rabbit would do next.

It was on a narrow two-way that bisected a quiet residential neighborhood that Tobin began to think the chase would soon be coming to a close. The Caddy was showing no sign of slowing or changing direction and yet up ahead, in less than a hundred yards, was the T-intersection with Main Road, which ran alongside the interstate. Tobin and his brethren made plans to put an end to it there.

Except the Caddy didn’t slow as it approached the intersection with Main. Neither of its brake lights even flickered.

“This is over folks,” he announced over the radio. “He can’t make that turn and he’ll never stop before he runs up that rocky berm and hits the concrete side of the interstate. Someone call rescue, it’s gonna be ugly.”

Tobin pretty much stood on his brake pedal and the Charger awesomely bled off speed, coming to a controlled halt just as the Caddy should have transformed itself into a very large, very awesome fireball.

Only it just kept going, or at least it didn’t stop. And it didn’t run up the incline of the berm and into a concrete abutment. It just wasn’t there anymore.

“Where’s your guy?” came over Tobin’s radio as each of the nearby patrol cars came to stops not far from his unit.

“Jesus, you see that?” was his response.

“See what, Sarge?” someone answered. “I just came onto Main. I didn’t see a thing.”

“He didn’t pass me,” came another voice.

Dispatch was also asking for an update.

“Standby,” Tobin told them.

He got out of the Charger, stared ahead at the shadowy side of the interstate and then looked around at the light flow of traffic, which began curling past the other two marked units, now parked nearby, their powerful roof lights the only things that could be mistaken for a blaze. Both officers got out of their cars and Tobin walked to them.

“What the fuck, Sarge?” one asked.

“Couldn’t’ve said it better myself,” Tobin replied softly. “Son-of-a-bitch must’ve been doing at least eighty-five when he crossed Main.”

“Yeah, well, then, what, ah, happened to him?” one of the officers asked, staring across the way. “A fucking Corvette couldn’t have made that turn, let alone an old Caddy.”

“Dash cam,” Tobin muttered as he took off running toward his car.

The Charger was less than three months old and had the latest digital system the city had sprung for. The tiny camera was mounted directly to the windshield and the playback unit, about the size of an iPad Mini, was clipped to the visor. Tobin slid into the driver’s seat, flipped down the passenger side visor and fumbled for the playback setting that would get him the last ten minutes of playback. His two compatriots had joined him and watched in silence as footage of Tobin’s unit driving slowly down Restaurant Row began to unfold.

They saw the man Tobin had seen running out of Sustainably Yours and lunging for the Caddy.

They saw the Caddy peel out, run the red light and speed up, commencing the chase.

They saw it stop and listened to Tobin’s colloquy with dispatch.

They watched as the Caddy took off, and the chase continued.

And they saw the Caddy simply disappear as it crossed Main.

“Jesus.”

“Holy shit.”

They were back at the precinct an hour later, gathered together in the briefing room as the video was played back again, this time on a much larger screen. The door to the room was locked and now the three officers were joined by the duty sergeant and their captain. When the playback ended, their reactions were more or less the same soft utterances as before. Then there was silence. It was several minutes before the captain broke it.

“You two also saw this, right?” he asked, looking at Tobin’s two fellows. “Live, I mean?”

One of the cops shook his head.

“I had just turned onto Main and all I saw was Sarge’s car nose into the intersection,” one replied. “Otherwise, maybe a blur, though I wouldn’t even swear to that.”

“But no Caddy?”

The policeman shook his head.

“And you?” the captain asked, turning to the other cop.

“I was in the area maybe ten, fifteen seconds earlier,” she replied. “No Caddy. I don’t know about a blur. Maybe, maybe not.”

There was another pause and it was the captain who again broke the silence.

“When was the interstate built?” he asked of no one in particular.

“It opened in ’72, sometime in the summer,” the duty sergeant, by far the oldest member of the group, replied. “My dad took me to the ceremony. Mayor was there and everything.”

“So they probably started in on it in, what, maybe ’70?”

“Something like that.”

“And the new junior high?” the captain wondered.

“Eighty-six,” Tobin, suddenly feeling very tired, answered. “Mine was the first class after it opened, seemed exciting at the time. Why are you asking about it, and the interstate?”

The captain turned and set his gaze on Tobin.

“Tell me this, sergeant,” he said. “Since you’re old enough to remember when the new junior high opened, I’m guessing there’s a chance you might remember what happened at the Italian Inn maybe two years before that. You know, old fashioned spaghetti house, same location as where Sustainably Yours is now.”

It was a moment before Tobin replied.

“I was there that night, the night you mean,” he finally said, his stare a thousand yards away, “having dinner with my parents and my brother. We’d just ordered when this guy came in, older guy, maybe my dad’s age, dressed in a suit and hat, takes out a gun, walks up to the owner and shoots him, twice in the head, then walks out.”

“You remember the car he got into?” the captain asked.

“I never saw what happened after, after the shots, my dad had us all under the table in like a second.”

“But you heard what kind it was, laterr, right?”

Tobin kept staring off into the distance.

“A Caddy,” he said, barely audibly.

“A baby blue, 1962 Cadillac Couple de Ville with a white vinyl roof and white stripe tires,” the captain said.

Then he read out the tag number Tobin had reported to dispatch and that had been clear in the video.

Tobin leaned forward, refocused his gaze on the floor.

“Here’s what I think,” he said, not looking at anyone, “although please don’t ask me why or how or anything else. The Caddy driver hesitated at the new junior high because it was the only place where the roads have changed since ’62 and it confused him for a moment.”

“So he must’ve been seeing the old road when it crossed Main, not the T-intersection and the interstate,” the captain said. “Is that it?”

Tobin stood and leaned back against the closest wall.

“Something like that, I suppose,” he said. “And thank God for dashcam video. Otherwise you’d all think I was crazy, right?”

Another Teaser!

It’s Money Side Up this time. This is the Carina Quintana Murder Mystery that preceded Havana Homicide, and while the prime locale is still South Florida and Carina is, as in HH, chief of the Fort Lauderdale PD, it’s a very different story–and the adversaries she faces are in a way even scarier (at least overtly)–than in HH. So when you finish Havana Homicide, here’s what to read next. Or feel free to read Money Side Up first. And while reading the series out of order works, if you insist on starting at the beginning, here’s the full list of Carina books:

Late Boomer

Roomer Has It

White Tie & Tales

Dead On a Rival

Loose Canon

All the Rage

Money Side Up

Havana Homicide

 

So, without further ado, here’s the opening of Money Side Up. Let’s hope it makes you want to devour the rest!

 

MONEY SIDE UP

by

David M Benson

Prologue

 

Fire and brimstone were the order of the day and it came in two forms. More prosaic and far less life-threatening were the powerful cracks of thunder and flashes of white-hot lightning that illuminated the pre-dawn gloom. Of more immediate concern were the blasts of heavy artillery and ugly rattle of automatic weapons fire and the accompanying blinding muzzle flashes. Carina had been through a few gunfights in her time but this was her first true firefight, and it seemed for all the world like a trip through hell.

She lay prone on her belly on the wet, sandy ground, isolated, in a small, oasis-like grove of gnarly trees and scrub grass, just yards from the beach. Firing her weapon would do little more than give away her position and so she remained powerless, as she had been since the ambush that had greeted their arrival at Hugh Taylor Birch State Park. All she could do was watch as a line of nasty-looking, mostly bearded and mostly young men arrayed in a daisy chain that stretched from a powerboat a handful of yards from the shoreline to a dark blue van parked at the edge of the scrub, passed bricks of cocaine and boxes of prescription drugs from the boat into the back of the van. The altogether too effective hail of cover was being provided by the rest of their brethren, along with help from a couple of wiry-looking devils in the boat.

The few other gunfights Carina had endured had been a great deal more one-sided, in favor of the good guys, and had ended soon after the first few clips of bullets had been fired. This reign of mostly large caliber rounds had gone on at a more or less steady pace for ten minutes and showed no sign of abating. The din had been punctuated by a brief silence and then by the almost unbelievable landing of a half dozen mortar shells, one of which killed an FDLE sergeant who had used the lull to change positions, another slicing into the lone DEA agent who had accompanied them. The source appeared to be the drug delivery vessel, a sleek, fifty-odd-foot craft positioned in the shallows just off the beach. There was no reason to believe that additional mortar rounds were not coming.

Later, heads would surely roll at the Florida Department of Law Enforcement, the state’s equivalent of the FBI, as well as at Lauderdale PD, but not until long after the fighting ended, the casualties were counted and the reasons for the intelligence failure analyzed. At the moment that reckoning seemed a very long way off and not especially relevant. The whole failed operation had been hastily organized and Carina had expressed her doubts about the quality of the planning, the implementation of which she was given very little control.  Her Criminal Investigation Division’s everyday responsibilities included homicide, special victims, violent crime, and crime scene investigation. Narcotics, on the other hand, came under the purview of the Special Investigation Division, their sister organization within Fort Lauderdale PD’s Investigative Bureau. And, of course, she had no say at all in FDLE matters. It had been the police chief, at the behest of the SID and with FDLE input, who had planned and organized this fiasco. Carina’s people were only along for the ride, against her wishes, on the police chief’s direct orders.

While the intense racket continued Carina wondered how many more lay dead or wounded in this very lopsided and decidedly analog battle. For despite the considerable expense that had been lavished on weaponry by their adversaries, it appeared that not a dollar of it had gone to anything high tech, which was not what the narcotics guys had expected. There were no drones mapping the area, let alone shooting, no laser-guided munitions, nothing remotely fancy. Carina had not even noticed any telltale red dots from laser-aimed firearms. It was old-school point-and-shoot that confronted them, but what their enemy was pointing and shooting far surpassed the power of anything deployed by the Florida cops, and there was clearly more of it, much more.

She had no clue where the boat had come from or who manned it, but the unsavory fellows on shore were members of a notorious motorcycle gang called the Devil Kings whose charters extended from South Carolina to Florida.  A tip had come in to Fort Lauderdale PD very late the previous night, Sunday, that the gang was planning to meet their regular drug supplier for a shipment that would be brought in by boat to this very spot on Fort Lauderdale beach just before dawn on Monday. Their normally level-headed chief had been under enormous pressure to stem the tide of drugs entering the city, which had reached levels not seen since the eighties. He had immediately called for all hands on deck from his detective squads, along with as many uniforms as they could get in touch with on such short notice so late on a Sunday night. But in Carina’s opinion at least, he had not pushed back hard enough for more information on the tipster, who had identified herself only as the old lady of one of the local club members. Instead, he had assumed that the woman was probably providing payback for some sort of recent abuse at the hands of her old man and perhaps other club members. That, in turn, led him to believe that the deal was, in fact, a regular drug shipment that involved only the Kings’ local charter. It was only at Carina’s insistence that he had summoned the FDLE and notified DEA, and then only after Carina had convinced him that such a move was likely to reflect favorably on him. Not only would it show that he was a team player, willing to share at least some of the limelight, but more importantly it would also improve their odds of there being any limelight to share.  Those agencies had not had the time, however, to further check out the tip and had instead relied on the chief’s view of it, which they felt was at least reasonable.

Carina had not agreed and had taken one more step, this one behind the chief’s back. She had called one of her contacts at the Coast Guard and alerted her as well, to the deal and to the possibility that more firepower might be needed. It was the Devil Kings, who would distribute the drugs in the Lauderdale area, that the Florida cops were primarily after, so once that bust was made, the Coast Guard was welcome to go after the delivery vessel, she told her contact, but she had insisted that they not to attempt an interdiction of that vessel until the drugs were off-loaded. If the Fort Lauderdale police department lost the bust because the Coast Guard got overanxious, Carina made it clear that it would be the last time she would alert them to a possible seizure.

“Feel free to surveil the area, record the thing, whatever, while the deal is going down,” Carina had said before ending the call, “but make sure the bad guys don’t see you. Once we make the bust on shore, the boat’s all yours, although don’t tell my boss I said so. Oh, and if things are really going south on the ground, forget everything I’ve said about hanging back.”

And things had gone south almost immediately and as soon as Carina realized what her group had actually walked into, she hastily texted a MAYDAY to her contact and pleaded for immediate help.

No worries about credit/blame—life or death now! she added to the message.

She was sure they already had choppers in the air and she had sent the message nearly five minutes ago.

“So where the fuck are they?” she said, biting her lip to the point of drawing blood as automatic weapons fire and the shriek of an incoming mortar shell filled the air.

The last of the drugs had been passed along the daisy chain and Carina expected the delivery vessel to head out to sea at full power any second. But when it did not, it struck her that the firepower emanating from the boat had very likely come from weapons that were meant to be part of the deal and were not merely the vessel’s own defenses. This was no ordinary drug deal and given the profits to be made on the kinds of arms the boat apparently carried, especially the mortars, she was sure that its commander wanted to make certain that the weapons portion of the deal was also completed, despite the unexpected presence of law enforcement. And perhaps, too, she thought, he had been unable to resist the opportunity of using his impressive arsenal to inflict additional casualties on those police.

Sure enough, the daisy chain began passing along wooden crates and there was another hail of mortar and heavy machine gun fire from the weapons that remained on the boat, at least for now. Seconds after the barrage began two more officers lay dead, and judging by the screams coming from around her, there were more wounded. And the blood dripping down her left cheek suggested that one of them was her, even though she could barely recall the high-pitched roar of the high-caliber bullet as it had whizzed past her head. The greater concern was the pain in her left shoulder, which seemed to grow as she thought about it. And her breathing began to feel labored.

“Shit!” she hissed. “Where the fuck’s the cavalry?”

As Carina peered over a small rise in the grassy sand, one of the gang members reached into a pocket of his dirty leather cut, removed a phone and answered a call. He said nothing but looked south and gazed up at the sky. Then he nodded his head, ended the call and made a rapid circular motion in the air with his hand.

As the last of the crates were loaded into the van, cigarettes were tossed away or stomped out with heavy boots and one by one the men moved to their bikes as the boat powered up and headed out to sea. As the bikers started their engines, most fired off what they must have thought were parting barrages from their AKs or Uzis in the general direction of the police.  With the added bellow of Harley engines coming to life and the boat engines accelerating, Carina had to close her eyes and concentrate to figure out whether what sounded like the ponderous slapping of helicopter blades against the dense, humid air was real or merely wishful thinking on her part. But as the searing pain in her cheek grew and the throb in her shoulder and the left side of her chest intensified, the blue van was suddenly and catastrophically ripped apart by what could only have been rocket powered grenades launched from the sky. Chunks of burning debris were hurled high into the air, along with body parts, some still clothed, others not. As scorched metal, severed limbs and other detritus rained down over the area, they were accompanied by a snowy backdrop of luminous white powder, cocaine that had not been incinerated by the blasts.

An eerie silence briefly enveloped the beach and Carina could hear the boat’s powerful engines go to full power. But seconds later, as its ferocious clatter began to recede, that sound, too, was replaced by the concussive roar of another series of explosions and two bright orange Coast Guard helicopters came into view above the canopy of palm trees. Another brief silence was quickly replaced by heavy machine gun fire. But this time the source was the airmen in the choppers and the targets were the men on Harleys or those rushing to them, not the cops.

When finally the only sound was the pounding rotor blades, Carina tried to stand. But she made it only to her knees. Still, she could finally act and aimed her pistol at the few remaining bikers as they attempted to flee the area. Several of her companions had also survived the onslaught and carefully came out of hiding, joining in with pistols or assault rifles. With the help of a few more blasts of machine gun fire from the Coast Guard choppers, within minutes the remaining bikers lay dead or wounded, or had surrendered.

“You all right, Quintana?” someone shouted, and through the haze Carina thought it might have been Manny Solano.

She smiled, but all she could do was mumble Thank you, Jesus, as she dropped to the ground.

First Chapter of Havana Homicide

For those of you who’ve yet to read the latest Carina Quintana Murder Mystery, Havana Homicide, here’s a bit of a teaser to (hopefully) encourage you to get the book and read more.  It’s the first chapter, actually, the prologue to the story.

Enjoy!

HAVANA HOMICIDE

by

 David M Benson

  A Carina Quintana Murder Mystery

 

Prologue

Friday, October 17, 1969, Red Hook, Brooklyn

 

The young man held a thirty-eight revolver steady against the underside of the table, pointed at his older companion’s gut, content for the moment to know that he controlled the timing of the older man’s death and savoring the short delay in its delivery.

“War is hell!” the older man bellowed, slamming his fist down on the table, jostling the gun.

Eloy Quintana’s outburst quieted the boisterous crowd around them in the shabby bar, more likely because it had been made in English than because it had been made at all. The younger man sitting across from Eloy merely smiled.

“It was the American Civil War general, William Tecumseh Sherman, who said that,” he added, calmly, in Spanish.

The young man grunted and took a swig of beer, holding the can in his free hand, tightening his grip on the revolver with his other.

“And remember, my friend,” the young man said, “that was spoken by a man who had no doubt as to the integrity of his cause. He was a winner reflecting on the suffering that had been brought upon himself and his brethren even with an outcome of victory.”

Eloy nodded.

“Can you imagine, then,” he snarled, “how much worse it must be for the other side, those who lose not only the war but everything else they have and begin to doubt the integrity of their cause?”

“Like you,” the young man said.

“Dark times, my friend,” Eloy Quintana concluded, his Spanish rustic and his voice as rough as the unfiltered cigarettes he smoked and the rum he drank.

“Is that what you have done, begun to doubt the integrity of your cause?” the young man asked.

Eloy shrugged.

“If by my cause, you mean the defeat of that devil Castro, then yes, perhaps I have,” he replied. “But if instead you mean the broader cause of freedom for the people of Cuba, then no, not at all. And now, here in America–”

“Where you have become a student of American history, quoting Sherman?” the young man asked, smiling.

Eloy raised his middle finger.

“I have always been a student of American history,” Eloy said, “and you should be, as well, now that you are here. Believe me, it is nothing like what you have learned in school in Cuba. But here, for now, all is well, if you do not count the mess in Vietnam, and they have landed a man on the moon.”

“So they say,” the young man replied. “Speaking of history, tell me about the Invasión de Playa Girón. I was too young to recall very much and I have been told you were there.”

Eloy held up his empty glass.

“If you want me to talk about the Bay of Pigs,” he said, “first you must buy me another glass of rum, a double this time.”

The young man finished the last of his beer and signaled the barmaid for another one, and for Eloy’s rum.

“So, the Bay of Pigs invasion, as the Americans call it,” Eloy obliged, “was from the outset likely to result a loss for the invaders, for us, although this is easier to see in hindsight than from the perspective of the men who were there. You see, like Sherman we believed in the integrity of our cause. Still, when one brings together a group of hastily-trained volunteers more or less on the eve of battle and puts them up against a real army, one that has a good idea of the time and place of their foe’s arrival, a disaster should have been foreseeable, even at the time. Not that we saw it, of course, as I said.”

“But the leaders did, the planners?” the young man asked as the barmaid put their drinks down on the table.

Eloy scowled and took a sip of rum.

“Leaders?” he spat out. “They were Harvard boys and politicians who could not plan their way out of this bar if their lives depended on it. So it was not foreseen by the leaders that Castro would beat us back so quickly. Men died, hundreds of us, on beaches and dusty roads and in World War Two surplus bombers and in all manner of boats and in front of Castro’s firing squads.”

“It was a major embarrassment for the United States,” the young man said.

“I am sure they teach you that very well in Cuba,” Eloy said, pausing to light another cigarette. “Kennedy had to admit it was the U.S. that had supported us, this rag-tag paramilitary force of Cuban exiles that had tried and failed to oust Castro. So, instead of killing the scoundrel and his revolution it strengthened his resolve, that bastard Fidel, and his fucking revolution, maybe even legitimized it, at least to some, perhaps to many.”

“As you know I have only recently left Cuba,” the young man said, “and I can tell you that you are right, it did, to many.”

Again Eloy scowled and took a sip of rum.

“And what came next was even worse,” he continued. “The Soviets saw an opportunity too good to be true, ninety miles from Miami, and so we got the Cuban Missile Crisis.”

“I remember,” the young man said.

“American school children, my son included, hid under their desks, but no shots were fired, no buttons were pushed,” Eloy went on. “The Soviets blinked, and left, but that was the end of any U.S. threats against Castro.”

They were quiet for a while, Eloy drinking and smoking and the young man watching him, his finger caressing the trigger.

“You tell it well, the invasion story,” the young man finally said. “And unlike many of the others, you made it back. As you said, not everyone did.”

Quintana shook his head slowly and shrugged as he brought his glass to his lips and drank the oily, dark rum.

“But I lost my best friends and my faith, at least some of it,” he said softly. “There were about 1,400 of us, to start at least. A hundred or so were killed fighting, a handful made it out alive, about 1,200 of us were captured. Some died in custody, a few dozen were executed. The rest of us were sentenced to 30 years in Castro’s prison.”

“And yet, here you are,” the young man said.

“Yes, here I am,” Quintana said, “not dead and no longer behind rusty iron bars in Cuba.”

“In the prisoner exchange?” the young man ventured.

This time Quintana smiled.

“That is what some might call it,” he replied, taking a long swallow of rum. “Kennedy wanted us back and Fidel needed cash. What he got was food and medicine, $53 million worth in all, private money, more or less. As I recall there were even tax breaks for the donors.”

“God bless capitalism, right?” the young man said.

Quintana did not smile.

“It came to nearly $47,000 for me and each of my brothers,” he said. “It will take you five years to make that much.”

The table between them was square and old and like the rest of the bar had not been well cared for in its long life. A pack of Lucky Strikes, a cheap, plastic lighter and three empty beer bottles were scattered across its blemished top, a folded five dollar bill stuck beneath one of them. There was no steel pedestal to hold the table steady, just four rickety legs at its corners. Not ideal, perhaps, but the arrangement left plenty of room for a clear shot straight across from a gun held just below its gnarled edge.

The two men were silent for a moment. Around them bottles and glasses clinked, Chucho Valdes’ Cuban jazz wafted from the jukebox, cue sticks struck yellowed cue balls on formerly green felt and men talked and argued and shouted, mostly in Spanish. In all, the racket would be more than enough to muffle the champagne cork pop of that the home-made silencer would provide when the young man fired.

“In your version of the story, old man, you are a hero,” the young man said. “But you conveniently forget what happened in the years before.”

“Please don’t tell me that things were worse before the so-called revolution, under Batista,” Eloy leaned forward and hissed. “For one thing, you were a child, and for–”

The young man cut him short.

“I was not referring to Batista, or to any of that,” he said. “I meant only the jobs you did when you were not strutting around the Regla d’Oro as if you owned it. Those are the times I mean.”

Quintana looked at him quizzically as he picked up his drink.

“I remember things different things,” the young man went on. “For example, I remember, a few days before Christmas in 1958, when you killed my father and my uncle.”

Quintana eyebrows rose slightly and he leaned back in his chair but he said nothing.

“So you see,” the young man went on, “in my version of history, Cuban history, you are not merely a traitor to the Revolution, you are also a murderer who was lucky to avoid being taken for what you really are while you were in Fidel’s prison. If you had been, believe me, you would not have left it alive. But luck runs out.”

He steadied the top of the gun against the bottom of the table and squeezed the trigger.

Quintana’s face showed an instant of confusion, which quickly gave way to pain, and then, as he looked down at his belly and the red mass soaking into his shirt, grief.

The young man stood, slipping the gun back into the hip pocket of his gray work pants as he did. He took another five dollar bill from his wallet and set it down on the table with the other. Then he leaned over, clapped Quintana twice on the shoulder, smiled at him and walked out of the bar.

 

Looking for a Last-Minute Holiday Gift Idea?

…or, perhaps, a stocking stuffer for the avid reader(s) in your life?

A paperback copy of Dark Fire; Yesterday’s Tears would make a great gift (and the cover art alone will make them smile!).

While fans of science fiction will certainly be delighted with Dark Fire: Yesterday’s Tears, you don’t need to be a sci-fi addict to enjoy the story.  As the back cover description says, DFTY is really “a love story for all time.”

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Havana Homicide Goes Deep!

All right, I suppose it would be more accurate to announce that “Havana Homicide goes BROAD” but, hey, this is football season, right!

Anyway, in addition to its existing availability through Amazon, Havana Homicide is also now available from the Apple iBooks Store, as well as other e-book outlets.

So who needs Monday Night Football–especially when it’s the 5-6 Colts vs the 3-8 Jets–when there’s Havana Homicide to make your Monday night more interesting!